Monday, April 20, 2009

The Angel




Confused I was,that first time we met,
An angel on Planet Earth? Oh You bet!
Unbelievably beautiful,in white were u dressed,
That time almost froze,as I felt so blessed.

Searched like a mad,in malls,parks and bar,
Never came across a beauty,as perfect as u are.
Each time I meet u,in future,present or past,
It always feels as if,a spell has been cast.

With a glance of u,when my day begins,
Going gets smooth,losses seem like wins.
And with a sight of u,when the day ends,
Away from all the tensions,my heart bends.

Each word u utter,seems music to my ears,
Just to listen them,I can wait for a thousand years.
That mesmerizing smile,can heal a torn heart,
Just like a master,mending a piece of distorted art.

When you are beside,life becomes free of pain,
It feels so fresh,just like the first drops of rain.
Like the sky is described by the colour blue,
That word Cute,it feels,was coined just for you.

The world looks beautiful,and the stage all set.
Am at peace with myself,and got no regrets
Happily shall I leave,at the time of my farewell,
For it is in my heart, that you will forever dwell.

12 comments:

  1. I can't believe itz u who has written this, if ever ted mosby and ross geller would read this , they would feel proud of u,ur probably the coolest hopeless romantic. Way to go mate,good rhyme scheme,and yeeah every blog of urs has a very gud telling picture like the summary of the blog, thatz good creativity.Carry on

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  2. wah wah!
    Madam ka naam kya hai? Kahan milli?

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  3. Its high time people realize poem is not all about rhyming words....and i could feel ur pain trying to think of a rhyming word that fits the next line..

    But to accomplish the rhyming verse and still get ur feelings through was quite beautiful...

    But for future ,i don't wanna read goody goody poems from you ..write some stuff that's rebellious and smashing..Your views that is.[:D]

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  4. kya baat hai sir...aadaab arz hai...baaki jaane se pehle unko yeh directly hi suna dena.. :)

    very well written i must say..

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  5. bad writing....not even sophomoric...looks like a 1st year electronics guy writing about a 2nd year electronics girl :-P

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  6. it's beautiful...someone correctly pointed out that its like a 1st year guy writing about a gal studying in second or third yr may be...so cute..so honest..so pure..gr8 work subu..keep going:)

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  7. waise, Don Z is quite rigt about the 'rhyming' trouble that you must've faced...


    but in all- Simple, sobre, beaut usage of words.
    You were at ease with your feelings, and you did total justice to them...


    a real good attempt..
    Keep it up!

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  8. @imalive.....Thanx so much for such nice words..M encouraged!!
    @anonymous....Koi madam shadam nahin hai....Fiction hai Fiction :)

    @DonZ......I completely agree with u....But the fact is,my english isnt that good yet so as to appreciate non-rhyming poems,leave aside writing one......And regarding writing something rebellious and smashing,point taken :)

    @Amit..Thanks :)

    @Swamy......Tu bahut bade wala kamina hai....

    @Shilpi.....Thanx so much..M doubly encouraged :)

    @Joy.....Thank u hai :)

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  9. dont know..if this is good or bad..lemme take this opportunity to tell u something..had my first quarter ending party at my new job today..was 7 pints of beer and a whisky and a peg of rum down..when i read this..and trust me..it brings me some nice feelings in my already lovely state of mind..just wanna say thank you and do keep em coming buddy..forrest gump theme at the background and life's good..luv you:)

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  10. Aah.....Feels Nice Mohanty....Thanks :)

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  11. sripriya,

    wat liked hte most abt ur blog is tht the very simple things of life u have brought it out so articulately ingrained with finesse and a sens eof style.
    i hope u continue to keep writing in a style that is so unique and is always a pleasure to read!!

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  12. Very Nice use of words and sentences!

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